Thursday, March 19, 2009

Melt In Ya Mouf #6

I was feeling real pretty today.
Makeup was applied to perfection and I let my
Hair blow in the wind carelessly
My skirt twirled beautifully beneath my knees
And I swear I felt the sun kiss my neck
Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth
And as I attempted to swallow the thought,
I choked and realized feeling pretty doesn’t matter
When you’re not whole.

Love.Tianamonique.

*There is a melt ya mouf #5... but I'm keeping it to myself. =]
I swear I know how to count I swear!!
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15 comments:

  1. DevonMarch 19, 2009 at 7:10 PM

    i loveeeee it, T!!!!!!

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  2. UnbreakableMarch 19, 2009 at 8:09 PM

    I really like this, sounds really beautiful.

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  3. OBMarch 20, 2009 at 9:09 AM

    This one is my favorite, I can much relate!


    -smile-


    L

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  4. ThaFamousNobodyMarch 20, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    Cute.. I rox with this. Scream at me via myspace or something. my info is on my profile. I been trying to reach you but cant find you!! :D

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  5. Melody.DarleneMarch 20, 2009 at 2:58 PM

    hey mamas... ferrr real... i LOVE that! so beautifully written! i felt every word! especially "Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth" ...uh ah! i know that feeling!

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  6. ChaveeoMarch 21, 2009 at 12:10 AM

    wow!

    your awesome :)

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  7. All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] RawdawgbuffaloMarch 22, 2009 at 8:17 AM

    sounds like the plan to me hope u dont mind the visit folk rawdawgbuffalo

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  8. JKiszMarch 22, 2009 at 11:47 AM

    don't you just love feeling this way. -sigh- lovely.

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  9. JillianMarch 22, 2009 at 5:47 PM

    that was dope..

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  10. Tha BossMack TopSoilMarch 24, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    I believe you like a muthafucka

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  11. chikkMarch 24, 2009 at 12:55 PM

    geeez, ur words are alwayz fit my life to the T. =/ amazing

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  12. (vixenchick)March 24, 2009 at 3:47 PM

    ooh i love it! and you got my song on your music player! i love sade.

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  13. PhlyyGirlMarch 24, 2009 at 4:24 PM

    Damn, I felt this. *sigh*

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  14. MuzeMarch 25, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    aw.

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  15. ElleApril 13, 2009 at 10:18 PM

    And I swear I felt the sun kiss my neck
    Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth
    And as I attempted to swallow the thought,
    I choked and realized feeling pretty doesn’t matter
    When you’re not whole.

    I am inspired by your heartache.

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