Thursday, March 19, 2009

Melt In Ya Mouf #6

I was feeling real pretty today.
Makeup was applied to perfection and I let my
Hair blow in the wind carelessly
My skirt twirled beautifully beneath my knees
And I swear I felt the sun kiss my neck
Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth
And as I attempted to swallow the thought,
I choked and realized feeling pretty doesn’t matter
When you’re not whole.

Love.Tianamonique.

*There is a melt ya mouf #5... but I'm keeping it to myself. =]
I swear I know how to count I swear!!

15 comments:

Devon said...

i loveeeee it, T!!!!!!

Unbreakable said...

I really like this, sounds really beautiful.

OB said...

This one is my favorite, I can much relate!


-smile-


L

ThaFamousNobody said...

Cute.. I rox with this. Scream at me via myspace or something. my info is on my profile. I been trying to reach you but cant find you!! :D

Melody.Darlene said...

hey mamas... ferrr real... i LOVE that! so beautifully written! i felt every word! especially "Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth" ...uh ah! i know that feeling!

Chaveeo said...

wow!

your awesome :)

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

sounds like the plan to me hope u dont mind the visit folk rawdawgbuffalo

JKisz said...

don't you just love feeling this way. -sigh- lovely.

Jillian said...

that was dope..

Tha BossMack TopSoil said...

I believe you like a muthafucka

chikk said...

geeez, ur words are alwayz fit my life to the T. =/ amazing

(vixenchick) said...

ooh i love it! and you got my song on your music player! i love sade.

PhlyyGirl said...

Damn, I felt this. *sigh*

Muze said...

aw.

Elle said...

And I swear I felt the sun kiss my neck
Then I heard your name dissolve in a strangers mouth
And as I attempted to swallow the thought,
I choked and realized feeling pretty doesn’t matter
When you’re not whole.

I am inspired by your heartache.